Lynlyn

Oh, wow. I really like this. There's a heavy sense of... er... place in this piece, for lack of a better word. The story and the setting are kind of ...

I still think the use of red is a little excessive. After all, if this were published in novel form, would it use red ink? Surely we all imagine our ...

This is a nice poem, but I agree with bubbles on the fact that it could be better if you included a little more of the abstract rather than direct ...

Just chill, man. Don't sweat the small stuff. I didn't have to look anything up to read this, and I certainly don't think it's wordy as a poem in general. ...

This is amazing. If you printed this on a shirt, I would wear it. (And, probably, so would a thousand other people at the large Classical-culture-geekfest I'm going to in ...

It's nice, but... I don't know. I'm sure the repetition of "pure" and "purity," etc, was intentional, but it just sounded a little sing-songy to me, really. I agree with ...

Many of the earlier posts pointed out things that I noticed. I think your description is a little heavy in some places. That's pretty much my only beef with this ...

I wrote this about a week ago, but couldn't post it... it kept saying there was something wrong with the PHP database or something o_o Let me first say that ...

I like this piece - especially because some parts struck me as sort of darkly humorous (especially certain vocabulary in the ninth line). But maybe I am just a sick ...

Looking back on this review that has somehow grown to a monstrous two pages in Word, I must apologize for the length. I haven’t done peer editing or revision for ...