Luxury

Also, I am considering what you said about the beginning. I think if I made the second stanza's rhyme sequence aabb instead of abab, it might help the symmetry of ...

This isn't my very first poem written, but thanks for the input. It means a lot. For years and years, I had such a doubt that I could ever write ...

Thank you so much! The point of view change was indeed intentional. I was considering changing it, but for this poem, I think it fits my purpose. Actually I didn't ...

This is amazingly well-written and definitely evokes emotion and imagination within the reader. It is gorgeously sad and relatable, but also makes you glad for some reason. At least, it ...

I loved your bold text (; Thought it added to the intensity.

The only stanzas I think are different from the others in the flow are stanzas 3 and 5, but I think you should keep them how they are. They actually ...