Lupin

Thanks for the review! I think it's roughly finished, I can't see it being lengthened or anything like that, however it's in need of an edit haha.

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Thank you for the review! All comments taken aboard. Lupin :)

Oh my gosh. This is amazing. I would try and give a better review than that but honestly, I don't think there's much you could do to improve it. Outstanding.

Hey amyyy! Thanks for the review and encouragement!

Thanks Reet3103! My initial meaning that I wanted to include was basically the sensation of 'going under' in hypnosis. Of course, as you said, there are many interpretations of any ...

Hey Savvy! Thanks so much for the encouragement and the review c: I had difficulty getting the word editor to split the the stanzas - I gave up and just ...

Hey Bilauta! What a wonderful name you have - I love it! You weren't overcritical at all, and even if you were it'd make no difference - I want to ...

Thanks cat! Cheers for the tips, and thanks for welcoming me haha - I made my account aaaages ago but hadn't used it in a long time. *eats cookie* :D