Lucia

It ended up looking like a pattern, I suppose, but in the first section, the position of my words were meant to be every-which-way, messy, and unpredictable. The part where ...

Don't worry, I can be pretty crazy sometimes as well. ;) Thanks a lot for reviewing, and for all the lovely compliments you included. I feel very flattered right now, ...

Haha... thanks for reviewing! I, too, noticed that there was something strange about the clover sentence, but I wasn't sure how to fix it at the time. I'll see what ...

You're welcome for everything, and thanks for the explanation. :) Feel free to let me know when your next works are posted. ;)

Thank you for all your words of encouragement and compliments! Before I say anything else, I want to let you know that I think that you review very well. You ...

Thank you for reading this, and also for all the critiques and compliments that followed! It was very helpful! About the bible story, the original doesn't actually focus on one ...

Just for everyone's information, I am slightly making this a little modernized by adding things like "monthly pamphlets". I was keeping in mind how advanced the civilization may have been ...

Thanks for reviewing it! You brought to light some things that I wouldn't have noticed otherwise!

Anytime!!! Thanks for writing!! :)

Gotcha. Well, let's see what happens, then, shall we? :)

If this is a flashback, maybe you should explain it in a paragraph, or maybe just give us a hint. :) You're welcome!

Thanks! Yes, Team Aqua won.

Thank you, biju, for your review and all the compliments that came with it. :) When I write poetry, I try not to focus too much on rhyming, because if ...

Wow! You picked up a lot of things I missed, so thank you!! Your first nitpick (I love that word.. :) ) actually helps to level out the syllable count! ...

No offense taken at all!!! :) Thanks for your compliments.