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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Seeking Shurikens

    I really loved this. You have a talent for writing. You excelled very well on Wattpad and you've done equally well in here. You were the one who introduced me ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Taking Chances

    There are couple of nitpicks that have previously been pointed out but I won't. I know I'm a bit late but I only joined yesterday so... well, yeah. Anyway, I ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Prophecy Ch. 7

    I like this. It's a reasonable length, with good interesting names such as Herman and Judas. Constructively, it can get a little confusing at times. However, don't let this put ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The GES, Sands of Time: Chapter 2, Part 2

    It's refreshing to see books that are good AND have the elements of science-fiction and fantasy. The last book I read like that was Gone by Michael Grant (if you ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Week For the World: Day 2 :Part 1

    I think this is good. It has good character names, excellent vocabulary... I like the fantasy-adventure element to it. Not sure if you've read Percy Jackson but if you have, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Four, Part One

    I think this is good. It has good character names, excellent vocabulary... I like the fantasy-adventure element to it. Not sure if you've read Percy Jackson but if you have, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Falcon

    It's a wonderful poem! It's clever, with the nice range of birds. I think it's beautiful, really sweet and just... I'm at a loss for words, it truly is beautiful. ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Well, somebodys done their homework...

    This is really good. I like it. It's an interesting idea, fairly original. Interesting names, too, albeit a little unrealistic. I'll be honest and don't take this the wrong way, ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Goldbyrne - Chapter One

    I really like this. This is one of the sorts of books I wouldn't usually go for (no offence), however I cannot possibly fault this piece of work. Your grammar, ...

    Aug 25, 2013


Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
— Enid Bagnold