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Re: Seeking Shurikens
I really loved this. You have a talent for writing. You excelled very well on Wattpad and you've done equally well in here. You were the one who introduced me ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Taking Chances
There are couple of nitpicks that have previously been pointed out but I won't. I know I'm a bit late but I only joined yesterday so... well, yeah. Anyway, I ...
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Re: The Prophecy Ch. 7
I like this. It's a reasonable length, with good interesting names such as Herman and Judas. Constructively, it can get a little confusing at times. However, don't let this put ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The GES, Sands of Time: Chapter 2, Part 2
It's refreshing to see books that are good AND have the elements of science-fiction and fantasy. The last book I read like that was Gone by Michael Grant (if you ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: A Week For the World: Day 2 :Part 1
I think this is good. It has good character names, excellent vocabulary... I like the fantasy-adventure element to it. Not sure if you've read Percy Jackson but if you have, ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Four, Part One
I think this is good. It has good character names, excellent vocabulary... I like the fantasy-adventure element to it. Not sure if you've read Percy Jackson but if you have, ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Falcon
It's a wonderful poem! It's clever, with the nice range of birds. I think it's beautiful, really sweet and just... I'm at a loss for words, it truly is beautiful. ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Well, somebodys done their homework...
This is really good. I like it. It's an interesting idea, fairly original. Interesting names, too, albeit a little unrealistic. I'll be honest and don't take this the wrong way, ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Goldbyrne - Chapter One
I really like this. This is one of the sorts of books I wouldn't usually go for (no offence), however I cannot possibly fault this piece of work. Your grammar, ...
Aug 25, 2013
