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Aren't you glad? :twisted: One thing I've noticed in your stories is that you switch tenses a lot. Rumor was , she was poisoned by Nyl, but they never figured ...

Wow. This is interesting. Thought the name idea was pretty cool, and liked how you didn't just come out and say it from the start. When I was reading the ...

Finished it! Got it day before yesterday at 9:30pm and finished it at 4:00am this morning. We're moving into a new house, so I can only really read when everyone's ...

Wow. That was amazing! It was sad, but incredible. Nice work.

Thank you all! I fixed it up. Anything else? :D Thx!

ACK! :shock: What the heck it this story doing up????!!!!! I swear this is not supposed to be here! I don't remember posting it, either.... *dies of shame* Well, seeing ...

LOL I love this! This is perfect! Amazing, Amazing, Amazing. ...Has Brad read this yet??? :D

Thank you!!! :D:D:D:D

Fire Arris -- Thanks for pointing that out. Can you please let me know what was wrong with it and how I can fix it? Thanks!

They're teens. Sorry if I wasn't clear about that. I think it would be kind of weird if nine-year-olds were leaving.

Okay! So I took Mad's advise and added periods. Thank you guys so much on helping with this. And I agree on this last part: Can’t say no to Shadow. ...

Thank you! I suck with poems and thought this one was okay enough to post, but I have trouble with punctuation. I was wondering if I could maybe get a ...

Much better! Very nicely done! Only a couple goofs now: ...playing hi Nintendo ds... His ...He was Anchious because... anxious ...one of there 500 houses... their ...ran into his mothers... ...

You did an amazing job when it character voice. I think this make for an amazing prologue, and can't wait for the rest of the story! I agree, though. You'll ...