LovelessSummer

Hello, Loveless here! Plot: Honestly, I have no idea what this is about. Why were his eyes bleeding? And by the way the woman said "again" it makes me suppose ...

Hiyas-leave it spellcheck-, Loveless here! Question: What in the living hell is this about? An assassian? I can live with those. Ninjas? That would be bangin'. Plot: I can't comment ...

Hiya -leave it spell check-, Loveless here! Welcome to YWS! And first, before I review, I recomend you take a little peak at the rules, but since I'm already here ...

Hello, dearie. Loveless here. *bows* Well, well, well. Honestly, I'm a bit pissed off that you left me with such a mind-racking ending. jMin *hugs* thank you. The gods know ...

Hi, Loveless here! *munches on a muffin* Well, this was differnt, and I have a few questions. Why did they just leave the body there? How come the dog -or ...

Hello -again-. By this time you should already know who I am so there is no need for an introduction. But, for those who don't know who I am: Loveless ...

Hello, Loveless here on her cell to say: *Writing* I somewhat agree with the other two lovely writers that posted before me. You don't use much imagery, and always say ...

Hello, nice to meet you! Loveless here to say that this was interesting. You often forgot to capatilize your I's. Yes, I know you may be in a hurry to ...

I just wanted to say that I thought this was spectacular. Honestly, I almost cried from the innocence in this. I am glad that someone already corrected the grammatical errors ...

I must say that this was simply spectacular. Also, I compleatly agree with Dreamy, ditch the name! It would add to the mystery. I highly urge you to compleate this, ...

I'm sorry that I have to say this, but this way too Twilight. Really, this screams Twilight! Boring town, hot guys, apples (really?), old truck, ugh! I hate that Ms.Meyer ...

Ello, darling! Wow, I really liked this. A lot. But I have a few concerns. The notes on the fridge and such, why were they there? Did he know she ...

First off you have to give two reviews before you post. It's the rules, hon. Second, I can't give this a proper review because I'm currently working from my cell ...

This was, so to say, different. I see loads of potential in this. I, however, have never seen Heroes so I have no idea what Miss.Jenna is speaking of. But, ...

I almost died while reading this. On the scene where he wakes up in Eddy's room I didn't realize I was holding my breath until I started getting dizzy. And ...