LoveableLittleSock

This was so annoying! You wanted to me to be harsh, so I'm prepared to do my worst. There is absoloutely nothing wrong with this piece (from my point of ...

Freaking phenomenal; you are truly one hell of a writer. Shall we get to critiquing? Apparently she looks just like me, but I don’t think I’ve ever looked that weak. ...

“So, x is equal to?” our Math teacher, Ms. Abott droned on. No!! You never start a story with dialogue - ever. First of all, you don't end a sentence ...

Ai yi yi. The way you described everything was simply breath taking. You wrote so well it was as if I was practically there. You did sometimes go overboard on ...

The wind pulled my hair across my face covering my eyes and the tears that rolled down my cheeks. Try to use commas. (The wind pulled my hair across my ...

Ai-yi-yi girl! That story scared me! But I must admit, I really liked it. Incredibly symbolic, and the poetry was so, hah, pretty. Like roses! The language was great. How ...

Wow. I mean, just wow. I'm racking my brain for something negative to say. Let's first get past the positives. First of all, phenomanal in the language department. I first ...

From what I can see, you had a brother that died at birth I suppose. You formed your clues in a very nice, poetic way which was clever than outright ...

I can *tell* that this poem in pretty awesome, seeing as how you're always so... professional-ish. But I sort of didn't understand some of it. Like, it rhymed and such ...

1 she lived in the deep south and her stomach was starting to swoon. it was a long sunday afternoon when she recalled to her parents how she made love ...

Now when I leave my doorstep, I shan't look into that waiting eye. Peeping from beyond the curtain, it is by some pain-wrought passion lit. But though I let my ...

Everyone is so like, they despise the dude who is going to be Edward. I guess when the readers visualize Edward they think of a freakin' god. As he is ...

Time was slow, the days dragged on, life felt like a big chess game, and I was just a pawn. I moved without moving, and spoke without sound, I checked ...

In the realm of the fairies, a tiny queen is born. It is harvest moon night, and the rest is time in the morn. - "mourn" But wait! twilight is ...

My eyes peel back And I stare out yonder. My sword twitches. I see no tomorrow, Just an end to embrace. - Suspenseful You stand by my grave, You beckon ...