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Re: A Mile to Freedom
Living in a cult with you r parents , is not a pleasant thing. Yes, that means I hate my parents , and trust me its not fun living in ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: What Real Vampires Would Do
“What are you reading, Sam?” I'm reviewing this as I go along, and right now I don't know who is speaking, what their tone is, their expression, and so on ...
Dec 30, 2008 -
Re: Excerpt from my NaNo
Hey! I'm reminding everybody I owe an review that I'm going to get on it ASAP, so sorry 'bout the delay. Haven't read this yet, so feel free to delete ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: The Other Man (part one)
AH. It's so long. Unfortunately, it's time for me to go to bed right now, but I'm reminding everybody I owe a review that I'll get on it ASAP. I ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Life as a Ninth Grader (and on)
Hey there. I'm dying to do a line-by-line of this, but it's way too long and I don't have that much time on me. I have a couple things to ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: My Dearest Madelyn
Damn you. This will be difficult for me to tear apart. I really liked this! But don't expect me to go easy on you ;] I just finished critiquing another ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: Heartsick - Chapter One
Is there anything wrong with being ugly? I happen to like being ugly. Celine thinks that me thinking being ugly is weird, and I don't see why. If it's not ...
Dec 14, 2008 -
Re: The Broken -- Traitor Colonel -- Chapter One
And suddenly Leo was standing in the woods, his bare feet itching against the undergrowth and his skin smothered in goose bumps. He blinked, looked down, and realised he was ...
Dec 2, 2008 -
Re: Christmas joke.
If heaven only knows, then what are we to do? When preying to a God, you can't speak to. Preying : To hunt, catch, or eat as prey: Owls prey ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: The method of madness
The streets were ghostly quiet, surprisingly lonely, and disturbingly distraught. Only litter stirred there, shifting uneasily in the wind, while the sky was as pale and mild as a newborn. ...
Nov 12, 2008 -
Re: Chapter Seven -- The Note and the News
“I want this power switch to happen already” Rose said “I want to get out of this place.” “I know, it won’t be long now” Sarah said “a few more ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Sleep
I go to a place where I might fly "Might fly?" Why might? When you sleep and dream you can do almost anything, so I do not see why this ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Vicissitudes--3. Tyler
Later I started seeing noticing I think this is a typo or something. It's at the part when Tylers like, "That's when I started noticing Lawrence..." I think you were ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: The Triangle Effect
“Hey, Chris!” Oh god - a short story that starts with dialogue. I'm sorry, but that is the cheapest way to start off a piece of writing. Dialogue is truly ...
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Lana
Lana leaned against the school lockers as she watched Kyle talking to Madison. Although Madison was new to the school, she already had a throng of guys who were ready ...
Jul 20, 2008
