Lost_in_dreamland

I really liked this poem. It's not perfect, but other people will point out on errors, I'm sure. I enjoyed it. It's so true, as well. I like the balance ...

Ok, it might seem boring. But it's not claiming to be a masterpiece, I liked it, you obviously had fun writing it. Anyway, without observation we'd be terrible writers. We ...

Here is the first chapter of my new working project, and hopefully not a total disaster =P. Yay, I'm the first to review, but I probably won't be :lol: I've ...

Okay, I liked this. It was very mournful almost an elegy. However, it lacks imagery. Give it some imagery and it'll be great, use some figurative language, similes, metaphors etc. ...

One of my problems with this poem is I don't really like how you formatted the stanzas. I'm not sure if you were trying to mimic the poet you mentioned ...

For Castlesinthesky's contest, I picked picture number 7. Aw, I love Sarah ;) He had been thrown unceremoniously into the cell, landing hard on the cold stone floor. James tried ...

Sarah, I demand you tell me what happens next. Utterly demand it. Beyond demand, I completely order you to do so. I shall not be silenced. Fine then, I recruit ...

I cannot explain how much I love that book. It was the first classic I ever read and I just love it so much. I am a firm believer in ...

This is rather...philosophical. But to be a philosopher we must not only question, but have opinions too. So it's very well to question things and ask of this world the ...

Tea party smiles and cold, polite hands. Driftwood hollowness and castle sands. A kiss on the cheek, pure and virgin. Shrugshouldered pilgrims, blue and puritan. I really like this first ...

Stars Mysterious, infinite, Sparkling, glimmering, dreaming. Wishing to shine brighter. Brilliance I really liked this poem xD It's very good ;) I only had one issue with it: :arrow: Last ...

Pancakes are yummy. Pancakes are good. Would you like to try some? I think that you should! heheheh this made me laugh so much :lol: I know that you want ...

Hey there, Broken I'm Lost or Kirsten, whatever you want to call me xD Welcome to YWS :D It's great here, don't let the harsh critiques get you down, some ...

I Sing Alone The day brings sun when it once was dreary like the times we’ve sang in perfect harmony, but now I sing alone. I totally agree with Jig, ...

Note: I haven't written poetry in a long long time it seems but I just felt inspired today so rip it apart and I appreciate all reviews and comments. And ...