Lornthalas

First, let me start by saying that I have not read the other chapters in your book/novel. However, I did enjoy this one and I will entertain the idea of ...

A touching and thoughtful poem. I would prefer not to approach the subject matter from a philosophical perspective and I would rather just appreciate the opportunity to highlight some grammatical ...

Excellent poem! Although I am slightly abashed to admit this, these types of romantic poems are, in their own lovely way, beautiful. The first ** line, "To you, my heart ...

I certainly enjoyed the poems! Having three short ones all together makes the work three times as thoughtful and entertaining! I concur with WallFlower about the grammatical changes (I know ...

Fabulous job! That's just down right funny! The details were well employed and I really enjoyed the brief, but fulfilling read. The only part that appeared in need of correction ...

This is a rather touching poem, it is truly one that pulls at the heartstrings the way the Mute Maven plays her etwahl. I thought that the details were beautiful ...

Well said! Just, uh, please refrain from taking the route of Emperor Palpatine in this fine establishment! The vocabulary was exceptionally astounding, though I am sure that for yourself this ...

I sincerely hope that not everyone views women in this manner, as I for one tend to take a modernist equal-sex approach. The poem is rather nicely written, with very ...

Well wrote magpie! Although short, the poem is very sweet and touching. I would recommend that you perhaps consider lengthening it by divulging what about the Earth is harming the ...

Very well written, the work is a thoroughly romantic poem. The imagery was well pursued and the details of each line were each explored in turn. The depth and sincerity ...

Wowza! That's some seriously sincere thinking you've been doing! The amount of thought put into the post is clearly apparent, however I must agree with Millanimo in that you should ...