Lorens_01

Thank for your criticisms once more! I'll try to improve this in the near future. :)

Thank you for all of your constructive criticisms. :D Again, fell free to demolish my story to make the best review out of it, ;)

I. Just. Have. To. Say. This piece didn't work for me. I didn't read a lot of it, so maybe I might not be the best of reviewers but... The ...

Yay, a fellow Pinoy! ;)Thank you for the review! I admit; I suck at grammar and I would really appreciate it if you would tell me. Anyway, I'll try to ...

Yup! :) Thank you for the compliment as well. I read my story again and you are right, there are parts which needs revision. I'll go over them sometime. I ...

Thank you for the reviews. I would find time to edit this chapter sometime in the future. The sentence structure has some flaws so I'll try to make up for ...

Thanks for the advice Dark Sploosh , you'll know soon enough why this is a gender blender. Elentari , thanks for the comment as well, I just posted the second ...

Thank you for reviewing my work brainychic212 and DSF! Apparently, I reread my story and said, "Gosh! What they said is true! " Thanks for pointing out my weak points. ...