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Re: Nature
While the concept and message of this poem are articulated well I think a few things can be done to improve it. first off, If you develope the nature images ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: This world
Very good. The only thing I can say is maybe shorten the last line. Good job.
Dec 27, 2014 -
Re: This world
Very good. The only thing I can say is maybe shorten the last line. Good job.
Dec 27, 2014