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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: A Little Girl Grew Up In Here

    I enjoyed this poem. The constant sense of nostalgia really pushes your message through to the reader. Normally i am not a fan of too much repititous in poetry but ...

    Jan 13, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nature

    While the concept and message of this poem are articulated well I think a few things can be done to improve it. first off, If you develope the nature images ...

    Jan 12, 2015


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind