LordLoredaen

All in all, intriguing story!! Just the kind of think I myself like to read on occasion! Though there were a number of grammatical errors that I noticed, though in ...

Ok, sorry, this is a quick review, so I'm just going to say my praises, and maybe later let loose my critics. I LOVE this!! By my Faith in Christ ...

You know, my best friend is very much like you, and I mean very much like you! Heavens sake, you could be twins (bar the looks). Though I have to ...

On terms of "masterpieces of our time", this isn't anywhere close. However, on terms of "Most Kick-butt hilarious thing on this side of the Moon", this is up in the ...

All-in-all a very intriguing story!! I always love reading about Atlantis! A good subject. Can't wait to read the next two chapters!! You have my avid attention! I love how ...

I have to agree, great story but very rushed. I quote Treebeard "Don't be hasty". Also, please start a new paragraph when someone is talking! It made it extremely hard ...

Ok, due to the fact that I have virtually no time right now I'm going to make this short and simple. write the next chapter and get it up here ...

Intriguing story!! Can't wait to read more!! Though I did spot a few grammatical errours, such as lack of commas and word usage. But besides those couple of small errours ...

I really enjoyed this poem!! Being a musician myself, it got to me in a way. Now what I like in a poem is when it creates a mental picture ...

You use a very... interesting rhyming scheme. Other than that I like your use of words, though the images the poem created in my head were a bit abstract and ...