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Savannah, I'm glad to be the first to review a story of yours! Now, you posted on Christian Writers saying all you write is about God and I might just ...

Nico, I just really want to thank you for listening to emmy's awesome review. You should really thank her for it. Alright. This WILL be brutal. I'm going to try ...

Hey, TheNewHero here to review your poem. I'm not really a poetic type so my review won't be too awesome, but I do have a few things to say. The ...

Actually, Tiger, it shouldn't. At least not as I understand it. ---- Warning, this will be short. ---- Hey J. This was a really good poem. I like how you ...

Noooo! Dudette ruined it for me. I thought she was giving away Kaylie :( Now I get that you alluded to that he didn't know Kaylie was his by the ...

I'm going to review your work, as I said, Alice. Firstly, I want to ask you a series of questions and I'll tell you why. :arrow: What was the point ...

I loved your other piece , but this was a bit of a let down. All the better because it can be improved. The first point I have is that ...

TheNewHero nods. 'Master.' --- Hey Yoda, great to see you're writing again and hope to see more. What I loved most about this is that I knew where it was ...

Hey Pers, Sue here (and now I'm giggling). The other reviewers covered a bunch of points, so I'm just gonna say how much I love this (among all your other ...

Awesome. And if her suicide came on to quickly, just throw in an extra line or two. Perhaps show the dad's emotions. What I think we all liked about this ...

Hey mhutch, welcome to YWS! If you're confused about anything, don't hesitate to message one of the people with the colourful username. The ones in green are moderators so you'd ...

Hey, Hero here to review as requested. You might want to sit down, this will be long :D You don't have to read through it all at once, but don't ...

This was, in the end, simply average. It wasn't overly amazing or terribly bad. And that's because of several things: The Bad :arrow: The Narrator The Narrator was a little ...

TheNewHero, here to review! My general impression of this piece is that it was by far too short, too brief, too undefined. I understand that the Bible doesn't narrate things ...

Hi, I'm TheNewHero and I'm gonna review your piece :) Firstly I must say I liked your premise and your idea. In fact, it was awesome. But poorly executed. This ...