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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shatter Me

    So I loved this, good job. I loved the repetition in it and the use of roses and just the way you described things in general. I loved the whole ...

    Mar 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: NYNYLVNV

    OK so I don't know if I completely understand what's going on I kind of got confused in some sections... But maybe that's just me also the format is a ...

    Mar 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Grammatically Speaking

    Gosh I really loved this, and I totally feel it. I've totally felt that once especially about my ex... Anyways good job my suggestion is maybe put more detail into ...

    Mar 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: i can be your cup of tea.

    I really liked this good job. I really felt it and it moved. On the other hand I'm not sure if I understand how I can be your tea cup ...

    Mar 3, 2017


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind