LolitaRose

Hello! :D "Then to finish him off I shit his throat, and gave him a stab in the temple." I believe you mean slit? :) He tried hard to regain ...

Hi! :D Here to review. :) I was bred to kill. Yes; my sole purpose is to kill you, and everyone around you. What’s more – I am easily capable, ...

The House of Night series by Pc Cast and Kristen Cast. Could not stand these books at all. I'm pretty open to books, even those that many others haven't enjoyed. ...

Hello! :) The Butterfly Effect flashing across solar system’s planes * First off, wonderful name. Fits nicely. * I believe there should be a 'the' before solar system, yes? :D ...

That was sweet! I found the rhyming perfectly understandable, and easily flowing. I'm sure the girl this was written for will enjoy it. That is, if your sister chooses to ...

Oh...crap. I've read plenty of decent teen novels, I just have a hard time remembering them... Oh! 'Twisted' by Laurie Hale Anderson(I believe that's her name?) was quite good. It ...

First I'm just going to sum it up a bit: This poem definitely put images into my mind. The way you made your words flow helped the poem develop pictures. ...

I saw this the other day, and decided to pick it up for a light read. It turned out to be pretty good, since to tell the truth, I don't ...

That’s not his first joke about nature giving me a built-in rocket flare. Hah! I loved that bit. Nicely delivered, too. “Quiet,” I growled. While this would do, perhaps a ...

Steam rose from the cauldron as a mixture of chopped carrots and potatoes were tipped in. In my opinion, this would be a nice sentence to add later. I'm not ...

My comment's going to seem a bit useless since everybody's already covered what the few mistakes I saw, but I thought it was wonderful. I never really think of seniors ...

This was a very nice piece of work, and honestly I can't think of anything to change when it comes to grammar. However, I didn't quite understand how Christine died. ...

That was great! I want to help, but honestly, I can't really find anything. Besides, Saint hit most of it. Although I'll repeat what he said about the word usage. ...

And with supposed-to-be-funny comments, crashing both other people's dreams and their self-esteem. But you can also defend yourself with sarcasm. And the thought of being better than others. This migh

While there are grammer mistakes in this part, others already addressed them, so I'm going to review the basic story plot. Well, somethings are a bit...boring. Not as a whole, ...