Logic

Well, I think Incandescence was a little harsh, but he's half right. I'm no expert at poetry, but I will do my best: Firstly, ask yourself what it is about ...

Hi Kylan! Beside him, the older couple were talking softly between themselves, I find this a little tame—I struggle with the passive voice that seems to slow down the pace, ...

Hey HC! That was a nice little poem. Firstly, let me just point out that you don't need to have a capital letter at the start of each line, just ...

Bluntly? I hate Paolini. Wouldn't it be funny? We all make fake fanmail, e.g.: Dear Mr Paolini, I just finished reading "Eragon" I must say I am very impressed. I ...

Hi Dustfinger! "Malountic Teelious Panactos!" Hmm, I don't know about this for an opening. It is very forced on the reader, and it makes them struggle. It turns away a ...