LivitheWriter4

I love how you are so spiritual and emotional you are in this piece. I love how open you are about being broken. Not many people can admit that. I ...

This is excellent poetry. I love how you made it a double haiku. You used excellent structure, and I liked that a lot. I only had two things that you ...

This is a very interesting story, and I can't help but wonder, is it true? There are a couple think that I believe could take a little work. I don't ...

This is a stunning and beautiful, yet dangerous and mysterious story. You should certainly turn this into a long-term project or even a novel! I just have a couple of ...

This is an outstanding poem, and this describes perfectly how I feel. You should write more poems like this. Maybe you should make stanzas that connect instead of a line ...

This is a very good story, and it feels like we're having a conversation like I am asking, "So where were you at the disco?" and, "Were you there as ...

This is an excellent monologue, and I would positively use it for a future audition. There are just a few things that were questionable. Maybe not have the character run ...

This story has a really good plot and I am hoping that you will write more of it. There were a few things that were a bit off to me. ...