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  • Short Story » Science, Mystery / Suspense Re: Look Up (rewrite of p1)

    THIS IS AMAZING. I would 100% read more it reads like the start to a long dystopian series with infinite twists and turns. The world-building is fascinating and the whole ...

    13h ago
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Dellyween

    Woahhhhh this is super creepy. You are weirdly good at writing monsters, that thing is SCARY. I'll be honest you lost me a bit with the dragons, was it all ...

    14h ago
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Library Admirer

    Hi there! This is super cute and I love the library setting, the MCs caring for younger siblings is also a nice touch as it makes them feel friendly and ...

    14h ago
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rainfall

    Hi! This is lovely, you've captured a really magical yet universal experience of watching the rain. I wonder if some punctuation could be used to add emphasis, maybe before 'I ...

    Yesterday
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: A prayer (to me)

    This is truly incredible, it really sums up so many complicated feelings in a way that is incredibly powerful. I love reading things like this that are speculative but with ...

    Yesterday


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