Liv

Wow, after reading the comments here I found out how many others have Synesthesia, too! I really like this poem - not many people even know what it is but ...

Hey, Liv here for a review of your poem! I would like to start out by simply saying how much I love this. I think about this sort of thing ...

Hey, Liv here for a review of your poem :D I noticed that you said that you are trying to create your own format of poetry. When I first saw ...

Hey, Liv here to review your poem :D I think that this poem effectively encompasses the majority of people, myself included. I can't tell you how many times I've heard ...

Hey there! Liv here for a review! This poem is really interesting!! This is by far the most interesting format for a poem I've ever seen on here. It took ...

Hello, ire! Liv here for a quick review! :D The piece is interesting, and I'm rather intrigued as to what this novel is about :D For starters, I'll edit some ...

This was definitely interesting, and I definitley laughed. Hahaha. It was good, unique. NITPICKS! Edits in red, comments in blue: "Dad burn it!" huh? he he what? He said when ...

I'm really digging this. Despite the previously mentioned choppiness, it's pretty good. You gave good metaphors and the personification, in my opinion was great. But there was one thing: I ...

I rather liked this. It kind of made me laugh. It was well written, too. Teen readers can definitely relate to this, because nearly everyone goes through it. I personally ...