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  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Freak Fred 2

    Hi Chitz thank you for your review! I grew up watching courage the cowardly dog and was among my favorite shows the growing up and still to this day Freaky ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Freak Fred 2

    Thank you so much for your feedback Anne, I appreciate it! I tried to space it out however I couldn't seem to get it in the format I would have ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freak Fred 2

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Fields of Oak

    I thought this was a great piece of literature! Every line came together seamlessly and I love the metaphors you incorporated. I cant even describe how utterly impressed i am ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Daylight Companion

    Thank you so much Hunter I really appreciate your feedback! I also appreciate the feedback on the punctuation in this piece, it's never been my strong suit when writing but ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Daylight Companion

    That you so much for your feedback! I'm so glad you like it and it is in fact about a shadow and in a sense using personification to make it ...

    Sep 20, 2018


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