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  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Respect

    I can feel your passion and personality in the poem, I would have to say my favorite line would probably be: "I think someone forgot to turn my dimmer to ...

    Sep 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: How I want you to be ...?

    Wow this is just amazing! It really does speak so much of real desires one has in a relationship that most don't vocalize such as "In front of those who ...

    Sep 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Plight of Becoming an Adult

    I can relate to this on every level. I can feel the stress and pressure eminating from this poem, it captures entering adulthood perfectly. Constantly feeling lost, tired, stressed and ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Glass Walls

    Hi! I'm really impressed this is such a meaningful, deep, intense poem and with so many different ways it can be interpretated. What I get out of this poem is ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Tell My Dad

    I just want to start off by saying this is a really really good read! It's such a relatable piece for most every teen struggles with the relationship they have ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: My Fear (Revised)

    Hi! I'll start off by saying I really liked this piece! The way I interpretated your poems is that the person is not in fact talking to an actual person ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Smile i loved

    I'll start off by saying this piece is written quite nicely! I especially like the line "that were actually silent storms of shadowy fire" (that reminded me of the book ...

    Sep 20, 2018


Patience is the strength of the weak, impatience is the weakness of the strong.
— Immanuel Kant, Philosopher