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Re: Respect
I can feel your passion and personality in the poem, I would have to say my favorite line would probably be: "I think someone forgot to turn my dimmer to ...
Sep 21, 2018 -
Re: How I want you to be ...?
Wow this is just amazing! It really does speak so much of real desires one has in a relationship that most don't vocalize such as "In front of those who ...
Sep 21, 2018 -
Re: The Plight of Becoming an Adult
I can relate to this on every level. I can feel the stress and pressure eminating from this poem, it captures entering adulthood perfectly. Constantly feeling lost, tired, stressed and ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Glass Walls
Hi! I'm really impressed this is such a meaningful, deep, intense poem and with so many different ways it can be interpretated. What I get out of this poem is ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Tell My Dad
I just want to start off by saying this is a really really good read! It's such a relatable piece for most every teen struggles with the relationship they have ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: My Fear (Revised)
Hi! I'll start off by saying I really liked this piece! The way I interpretated your poems is that the person is not in fact talking to an actual person ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Smile i loved
I'll start off by saying this piece is written quite nicely! I especially like the line "that were actually silent storms of shadowy fire" (that reminded me of the book ...
Sep 20, 2018
