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  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Respect

    I can feel your passion and personality in the poem, I would have to say my favorite line would probably be: "I think someone forgot to turn my dimmer to ...

    Sep 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: How I want you to be ...?

    Wow this is just amazing! It really does speak so much of real desires one has in a relationship that most don't vocalize such as "In front of those who ...

    Sep 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Plight of Becoming an Adult

    I can relate to this on every level. I can feel the stress and pressure eminating from this poem, it captures entering adulthood perfectly. Constantly feeling lost, tired, stressed and ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Glass Walls

    Hi! I'm really impressed this is such a meaningful, deep, intense poem and with so many different ways it can be interpretated. What I get out of this poem is ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Tell My Dad

    I just want to start off by saying this is a really really good read! It's such a relatable piece for most every teen struggles with the relationship they have ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: My Fear (Revised)

    Hi! I'll start off by saying I really liked this piece! The way I interpretated your poems is that the person is not in fact talking to an actual person ...

    Sep 20, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Smile i loved

    I'll start off by saying this piece is written quite nicely! I especially like the line "that were actually silent storms of shadowy fire" (that reminded me of the book ...

    Sep 20, 2018


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