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Re: Untitled: Chapter 7
Wait. Did I miss a chapter??? I don't remember who Ben is? And what is this clothes tree? I must have missed something... I thought Wyatt, Timothy, and Cora went ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: I Could Only Watch
Thanks for the review. I need to get with the program when it comes to commas. Yeah and I really need to work on the details. I am struggling with ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: A Hunting Night
Thanks for the help! I completely agree with you. I need to work on that kind of thing and how to add more details. :)
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: I Could Only Watch
Thanks! I definitely agree with you. That is something that is very important to me when I am reading, as well. I appreciate your help. :)
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Don't Catch Me
I really love this poem! Everything seems perfect to me. You used great words that fit the poem perfectly. And I just felt it was nice to read. It seemed ...
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 6
First thing I noticed: your OCD when it comes to the battery life of your electronics. I laughed really hard when she said that her phone needed charged when it ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: A Hunting Night
Thanks. I get what you mean about adding details. I guess I need to find that balance. I did not want to add too much, but I did end up ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: A Hunting Night
Thank you so much! I appreciate it. :)
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 3
OMG I am so enthralled by this story.
Nov 10, 2014
