LittleLee

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Thanks for the clarifications!

Hey Andrew, Thank you so much for the review again! You've pointe dout some great stuff about the pacing, I definitely need to take another look at this chapter. About ...

Thank you so much for your review! Your points are completely valid, I'll make the edits. :) I'm glad you liked it! (Hyacinth is described in chapter 1, but like ...

Hey, thanks for the review! I really appreciate the time you put into pointing out all the places you thought could do with some improvement. I've actually already made some ...

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! It made my day. :D If you're interested in reading a bit more, I had put up the first chapter a while ...

Thank you for your review, Fishr! I've actually finished quite a few chapters for this novel, just haven't decided whether or not to out them up for feedback yet xD ...

Hey Col3, thank you for your review! I'll let you know if I do post the next chapters! :D

Hey MissGangamash! thanks for the review! Reviews: 224 DonateTue Nov 02, 2021 12:45 am MissGangamash wrote a review... Hello! Saw this in the Green Room, a first chapter, yay! Great ...

Thank for your review!

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Hey, Forever! Could you edit this to make separate paragraphs?

Well, it wasn't as bad as you think. Like I said, it can still be pulled off. But maybe you could split it into two chapters or write this entirely ...

Ah okie okie my bad

Omg okay I'm very surprised, I didn't think you were still very active! It's great to have you back! I reviewed all the chapters, as I promised years ago