LisaMCooper

I liked it and thought it was quite interesting. No mistakes found and I hope you do write more, as I would like to read more of your writings. You ...

Thank you very much for the critiques! ^^ I will take everything you said and try my best to rework my story until it is of a better quality! ^^

lol. I think right now you are my most faithful reader. Which is yay! ^^ lol. I'll work on Rebecca's story. I need to copy this one to word or ...

There is going to be a second one, set in the suburbs. This first one is set in the city. I'm having more trouble writing the second one that the ...

Eeee! ^^ Thank you to everyone who critiqued and gave their opinions on my story (or what there is of it). I'm glad you all think its good. But again, ...

Thank you all for your reviews. ^^

O.O I see everyone has already pointed out grammatical and spelling errors so I don't need to. But otherwise, I like it. Maybe fix a few things up here and ...