Linx

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Please make them kiss!! Please! I am begging you!!! Well, you probably will (hopefully) but I am not patient. Please!!!!!!!! (as you can tell by my capital letters a

He fell asleep just like that!!! Ah!!!! *screams some more* My stomach did flips when I read that. I am loving this!!!!! The only think I caught was that you ...

Everyday now when I get on YWS, I always ask "Has Meep posted the next chapter?" I am looking foward to every post you make! I couldn't find any grammar ...

Ok. Great again Meep. I am liking this! :D First off, during the game when Alex kicked the ball to Liz's head, what happened? All I know is that they ...

That was good. The only thing I caught wrong was that you spelled apologize wrong once. Other than that, I really like it. I can image everything that Liz is ...

Good job, Kaylyn. I really like that! :D It all worked nice together and it can be very true. Good job again! :D

I have to agree with Bickazer. Being Ameican, I thought football was actually tackle football. Plus, you used the word soccer some. It would help to just use football and ...

Hey, I got to read this again only with some changes that did make it better. When did Alla get red hair? Never mind................ Bunch of typos that you will ...

Hey Em, its your friendly neighborhood Cat. Welcome to YWS!! First thing, you need to review two different posts before you can post anything else. It is one of the ...

I will tell you first off that I am not very good at grammar editing, so I will leave that for someone else. That was really good though! Good description ...

My dad told me to shut up, because it's late and I was laughing so loud, it woke up my little brother. That was the funniest thing since my best ...

Ok, first off, Kaylyn, I stink at editing. But, I liked this poem, so I just had to review. That was really good. The description and the way you worded ...

Alright, first off, I am going to tell you that I am not that good of an editor. But I will try the best I can :D First off, I ...

I have been waiting all day to read this, and it ends up that I already have. Nice job, peanut. One thing I noticed, is that when you did this. ...

There comes a time in everyone's life that you love someone, but you don't know why. And the way you described it, was great. It was really good! It stayed ...