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Ok, this was good! :D Probably a little more desciption wouldn't hurt. Like, where are they? Are they in a field? Where is the field? Stuff like that. She wondered ...

That was sooooo sweet! :D Loved it. Also, you are a new member to YWS. So, Hello! Since you are new, you might not know about are rules. You need ...

I'm back! :D Since you said you needed help on the English, I'll help you then! (I don't hate guys but they're extinguish my patience, with they're stupid jokes) That ...

I like this! This sounds good!! First off, you need to capitalize some of your I's in this post. And the beginnings of some sentences. I'm 1,68 cm high Ok, ...

Ok, I think they got everything before me, but I have a question. What are the // for? Are they to seperate the paragraphs or what? It might be just ...

Ok. I just read these for the first time, and it is like I am in love again with Twilight. When you talked about Leah and Seth in Jacob's pack, ...

Yes, yes, YES!! I have been waiting for 42 hours to read this. YES! Loved it, loved it, loved it!!!! :D I think you spelled yogurt wrong. I think. I ...

Huh? *starts to cry too* You had to sell Roxie? I didn't know that. But didin't you just get her this past spring? Oh well. *cries* This was beautiful, truly ...

I liked it, for two minutes. If you had waited a bit longer, I bet it would have been better. :D To sum it up, that first line was awkward. ...

*shrugs* I liked it. It flowed nicely and that short sentence when it says, It was cold, too but I am not sure that there is supposed to be a ...

*shrugs her shoulders* I liked it. It really doesn't have to rhyme, because it might have been a free verse. I'll say it again, I liked it. I also cried ...

I just read all the posts that you have done on Tainted Blood, and I have to say that I am impressed. These are really good! :D I can also ...

This is a really good idea you have. To me throughout this post, you kinda rushed it. It all happens very fast, and this "Dave" finds out really fast that ...

Ok. Now I am a little scared about how this is all going to end. I can think of all the possibilities, but I have learned with you Meep that ...

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shocked, gasping, screaming, yelling at him!* HOW DARE HE!!!! Sorry for the outburst. It