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Re: The Dark
Gosh BBB. You put a end to my happy mood. That was so creepy, gross, and more words like that. You defiantely had some good description in this piece. Now ...
Nov 29, 2008 -
Re: YWS fanfic.
Loved it! *Lee rips off mysterious cloak to reveal harry potter* *Teddybear22 looks accusingly at Lee/Harry Potter.* Harry Potter: “I look so much better and so much more handsome than ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Perfection
You want to know something weird. I wrote and posted a poem called Perfection. And, it's about the same exact thing. Weird, right? I liked it though. Good job and ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
This was beautiful. I loved it. Wonderful, just wonderful. “I won't promise to wait for you Alastor McKinsley,” she said suddenly, in a much firmer voice than before. “I won't ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Unwilling Kiss
Awwwwww...... *cries* I think I am the only person in the world that has not read Romeo and Juliet. Now you make me want to read it. They both had ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the Hills - Chapter 8
Yes! *punches her fist in the air* Good job Reuben. Best chapter yet (yet, I say yet). "Which way were we going yesterday?" Elvy asked. After a few seconds of ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: A Broken Promise.
Awwwww... It was beautiful Kaylyn! I loved it! You strucked me in awe with your poems again! :D My trust in you has gone Like the shooting star above. Why? ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Right or wrong?
I love reading this. It's a sad scene, and you clearly showed it. Good job! I did notice a couple of errors. “I understand why you’re doing it you need ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Divorce
Did I not tell you about the rules? *sighs* The 2:1 policy. I guess I will tell you tomorrow at school. *sighs again* This was really short. Maybe you should ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Hopeless
Welcome to YWS, girl. I'm glad you joined, since you have heard Peanut and I talking about it all the time. With Leapy pointing out all the typos, I say, ...
Nov 24, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the hills-Chapter 7
Give me a day to review this Reuben. I feel like crap right now, and I probably wouldn't be able to edit well. Sorry dude. :( I will do this, ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Music In Me - Chapter 2
Sweet Meep:)! You have created another masterpiece. :D “Very funny.” I snap, irate. I had to look up that word. It really doesn't sound right there. Maybe irritated would be ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: untitled
I'm so proud of you Peanut. *cries softly and sniffles* Almost no mistakes, and nicely written. This is what you have been hiding from me for the past TWO WEEKS! ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Music In Me - Chapter 1
How dare you say you aren't good Meep. I thought we already took care of the self-esteem problems. :D Anyway, I think you are still basing this on American high ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: Midsummer Night's Dream Part 1
I've never read Midsummer Night's Dream before. Now you made me want to read it! :D Okay, this was interesting. I liked it. You let us know some things about ...
Nov 19, 2008
