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Re: A satire of Satire
First, I love how this poem flows like water. As I was reading it, I felt as though it could have been the work of Emily Dickinson or Robert Frost ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: The Wife I Onced Loved
I must say this confused me, but it does convey horror. The narrator said the cause of his wife's ailment was that their marriage was fruitless and childless. Then he ...
Aug 6, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.1
Okay, nearly everything that needs to be said has been, and I'm not truly qualified to challenge some other opinions of people's here. Normally, when I see grammar mistakes, I ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Fern - Chapter 1: First flight
I think this is a beautiful, expert way of making dragons seem like parts of a real world. The mention of them is somehow unsurprising and rather natural. Whenever you ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: discomposure
I know I seem somewhat negative here, but I'm really not trying to bring you down so that you know. I think this is a great poem, but it has ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Drive All Night
First--overall, I did enjoy this. Thank you for your post: it is quite good though in the beginning, the description seemed so vague that I pictured the woman lying dead ...
Aug 2, 2014
