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  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: A satire of Satire

    First, I love how this poem flows like water. As I was reading it, I felt as though it could have been the work of Emily Dickinson or Robert Frost ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Literature Re: The Wife I Onced Loved

    I must say this confused me, but it does convey horror. The narrator said the cause of his wife's ailment was that their marriage was fruitless and childless. Then he ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.1

    Okay, nearly everything that needs to be said has been, and I'm not truly qualified to challenge some other opinions of people's here. Normally, when I see grammar mistakes, I ...

    Aug 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fern - Chapter 1: First flight

    I think this is a beautiful, expert way of making dragons seem like parts of a real world. The mention of them is somehow unsurprising and rather natural. Whenever you ...

    Aug 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: discomposure

    I know I seem somewhat negative here, but I'm really not trying to bring you down so that you know. I think this is a great poem, but it has ...

    Aug 2, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Drive All Night

    First--overall, I did enjoy this. Thank you for your post: it is quite good though in the beginning, the description seemed so vague that I pictured the woman lying dead ...

    Aug 2, 2014


It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
— Albus Dumbledore