Linguistic

Thank you! I appreciate it :)

This made me so happy XD thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Your opinion means a lot and I'm really glad you liked it! ...

That means so much, thank you :) I added another chapter! Sorry, it's also a little lengthy, haha

This comment actually made me laugh really hard because I am not an amateur writer at all. If you see some of my other pieces, I'm actually quite good. I ...

I am definitely still working on this, and your feedback helps immensely! I will definitely work on the paragraphs you mentioned, because now that you say it, I see what ...

Oh this means so much! I'm so glad you noticed the whole ashes and embers comparison and such. I will fix the italics. On my computer it did it but ...

Added another chapter and would appreciate your feedback :)

(Added another chapter - would love if you could check it out :))

(Posted another chapter ;))

Some time soon, when I get the chance :) do you like it so far?

I'm not sure I understand your comment

Thank you! And no that made total sense ;) I'm so glad you liked it. And yes, I am the worst at describing the characters. Great with setting, terrible with ...

Thanks for the suggetion :) I did!

You seriously just made my day XD thank you so much for the nice things you said and thanks for the help!

That's a lot of help, thanks! I'll let you know when I post the next chapter (because I definitely need your awesome opinion)