LindseyBrooke

See, I didn't know if it would be odd or not.. I was trying to show just the POV of a character whose been tortured and abused by the woman. ...

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I really appreciate this. I just have one question for Pink or anyone else who wants to help me with this: As for your ...

I seriously love you guys. Thank you so much for reviewing! Haha, I thought I put too much description in it, but I wanted to make sure that the torture ...

Thank you all so much for reviewing! (: Yeah, the paragraphs are a bit long aren't they? Haha, I'll fix it up soon enough. And I want to try and ...

Thanks guys! I will definately use your advice and check out that link. :) Oh and I'm really sorry for not reviewing as much. I'm doing as much as I ...

Ok! Thanks! Yeah, I'm working on the chapters of this story so it can make a little more sense. Thanks for the reviews though guys!

Thanks a bunch! This is the first chapter I've posted on this forum and it's nice to know what I should add. Hopefully, you will read some more sections. I'm ...

kierstyn, i loved this. i would have to agree though with everyone else... don't switch tenses. but i loved how you described everything so vividly. maybe describe more about the ...