Lindsaroo

I wrote this in January and I'm getting comments on it in May...wow....And I didn't put this up but I wrote this like bout 2 years ago...and I know it's ...

Oooh! Canibalism! lol Still Awesome. I was so happy when Eolen came back for her! I knew he wouldn't leave her. This is turning out great. I can't wait for ...

Thanks. And yes Muffin, it is a girl, even though it says nothing in the poem about her being one. And to everyone else, Thanks again for the comments. *Lindsay*

Yay Megan! You posted it on here!!! I love this SO much. It makes me laugh! *laughs* lol Anyways...Love it and can't wait for more :) *Lindsay*

:O HEY! you posted it! lol. Just so you know, I like it. It sorta lost me when I read it earlier but after I read it agian I understood ...

Lol. I agree with Jules. I'd heard peices of it from Sam. Well mostly the idea, but that was really funny. I LOVE the part with Walst. XD This is ...

Yeah.......I liked it :D It looks like it's gonna be awesome. Now I have to go read Ch. 1.

lol I just re-read that and confused myself. It must've made sense to be before *shrugs* I'll try and fix it. Thanks ^_^

Thanks for the critisizm guys.

Awwwww Fabien, *cries* This was really nice. Yeah..I have no criticizim either. But Loved it! *Lindsay*

Because he is an outcast. That's why He is seen as one in my poem. He's not in pain he just is in his own little world and knows that ...

The older boy sat completely sill staring off into space listening with eyes closed. Shouldn't "sill" be 'still'? Pulling off the talisman from his belt, contained magic shaping itself into ...

Coolness!!!

Thanx 4 the critisizm. It's my first time posting poem and I need A LOT of help So...Thanx!

I think it was just beautiful. Sad, but very beautiful. And I love the way you wrote it. It's so different, but it's still awesome. Keep it up! =)