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Lily708

Lily708

  • Art » Other, Theatre Re: Nature's beauty

    Hey MagicAce!!!! Your poem's beautiful...incredibly beautiful!! Love the way you start with the rose to describe nature's beauty.I might not have any suggestions for you 'cause I'm still an amateur ...

    Feb 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hear me Pals!

    Thanks a lot for your review MJTucker...:) I'll try replacing those words you picked out..your hints are great!!!!:3

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hear me Pals!

    Hey,Silverberry!! Thanks a lot for your review,some of the hints you gave like dividing the poem,didn't strike me at all...was really helpful though.Umm..and yeah I'll try replacing the word dynamo ...

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: In Pursuit of Stars

    Hey!!! It's Lily here... It's a Beautiful Poem..like really beautiful!!!! The way you described the star in your hand....was awesome!! and...."Once you've inhaled the stars they tend to never let ...

    Feb 22, 2017


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling