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Re: DragonsShifter Chapter 1(OMG I love Dragons!!)
I love your story! It facinates me greatly! You are very descriptive, gives me a good mental image! You have alot of talent! But do you know the italics arn't ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: The idea of Me
I love your poem! It is very expressive and I can connect to it very well! Your words are a master peice! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 7 (Summary Included)
Finally! I made it to chapter seven! I have to say this is one of your best, you put more description in, but you could do better! I kinda like ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 6(Summary Included)
I liked this one too, it's not your best, but its better than most. I give it a 6.5 out of 10. I found some typos though, and even though ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 5(Summary Included)
I love this paragraph too! Agien, it's starting to make more sense, and I'm still very curious, you introduced knew mysters to the reader. Like their parents and Crane. I'm ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 4(Summary included)
I loved this one! It was eventful and I'm starting to find sense in the story and fill in the missing peices as I read. The loose ends are starting ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 3(Summary included)
This Chapter was confusing, but ok. It took me forever to read it. I like it better when you space out your paragraphs, easier for the reader to read and ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 2(Summary Included)
Once agien, you made a masterpeice! I like how you gave the reader some backround information so they can get thier thoughts straight. Your writing is eventful and beautiful! I'm ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani chapter 1
I like your story! It has alot of foreshadowing and the curiosity makes me want to run, not walk, to the next chapter and read it. It's good with alot ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Club.
I like your poem very much! I read it and it seems like the words of someone in deep thought, observing the world around them, I love it! It makes ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Flames of Hope
I love your poem! I like that you are very discriptive yet you keep some parts to yourself, leaving it with mystery and wonder. The reader now can let there ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Dear Daisy
I really like your short story! It's very sweet, and touching. I think it's perfect in almost every way! Keep up the good work! You're very dicriptive of your characters ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: In The Dark - Chapter 5
To sum it all up, I love your story! it's great, descriptive, and thrilling! I love how creative you are with this! I usually think the vampire thing is over ...
Nov 7, 2010