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Hello there! I haven't done a review in a very long time, so sorry if this is a bit rough. Anyway, I enjoyed this. The story kept me hooked until ...

Hello! I loved this. It's written really well, and it's amazing how you could get such an idea from that prompt. I was hooked from beginning to end. Just a ...

Hello there! I liked this, you've got some good ideas in here. The fight at the beginning was good; the way you wrote it shows the reader Callie's situation though ...

Hello there! This is a beautiful story; it's short and powerful, and very sad. I love the subtleness; how you say things with really saying them, like when Rosie's mum ...

Hi there! This is an interesting piece - I hope you're planning on making it into something longer. You have some lovely descriptions in there, especially in the first paragraph. ...

Hello! I read the first part which had some good reviews, so I decided to review this part straight away. It was a nice read; well written and interesting. It ...

Hi there! I really liked this, especially the beginning. The prologue dragged me in straight away, and the start of the first chapter intruiged me too: someone picking bunches of ...

Hi there! So, this is a good story, Maryann is a very intersting character. I liked the suspense you built up of the intruder in her closet, and the twist ...

Hi there! I really liked this, it's a change from the usual. I didn't find it contrived or stupid at all, it was actually very gripping. Just a few things: ...

Hi there! This is a nice little story about your love for your mother, very sweet. Just a few comments and suggestions (corrections in red, suggestions in bold): Do I ...

Hey there! This is sweet, and the style is definitly appropriate. Just a few nitpicks: The other animals didn’t mind, because there was plenty of food for everyone. I think ...

Hey there! I liked this: it's interesting how you made the main character someone with a lot of faults about him - it makes the story realistic. I also like ...

Hello there! I liked this - it's very captivating, and I would definitly like to read more. Just a few things: I remember the day as though it was yesterday ...

Hey there! So I like this story, it carries a nice message. I'll deal with the nitpicks first: How could anything matter to him now? Yeah , people always complain ...

Hello there! Thought I might return the review :) So I really enjoyed this. It's got a nice flow to it, and the characters are very realistic. It didn't seem ...