Lil_Pau

Wow. This is really one amazing poem. I cannot find any fault with it. I liked the way you described the stages of the tree's growth, and you did it ...

Hi there! I thought that this poem had really good imagery, but I didn't get what you were trying to convey. I also have to agree with bubblewrapped about you ...

That was a really funny poem. So far, I didn't find any fault with it. The rhymes were OK, the way you composed it was really 'neat' and it ended ...

Wow. The story seems to be getting better at each part. I actually liked the fact that you mentioned the legendary 'blood in a bathtub.' It seems to symbolize something ...

Hi there! I'd like to review your poem. ^^ I’ve spread my wings, I’m ready to fly, Why must you stop me one more time, To say goodbye? I can ...

Hey there! I'd like to review your poem today! :) This is a very unique poem. I liked the imagery you conveyed here, as well as some of the choice ...

Hi there! I've been following up with the chapters. So far, I really liked the pace of the story. It was really entertaining and done in an unexpected, unique way. ...

Hey there! I like this story. It's really sweet, and explores friendship in a different way. When I read it, it kept my interest until the end of the story. ...

Hey there AC! Welcome to YWS! First of all, I agree with mystymizer. Never call your work 'trash.' It not only can decrease the number of comments you'll get, but ...

Hm...hm... I thought that this poem was pretty good, but you should avoid the repetition of stanzas. It works in songs, but not poems. Repetitions can bore the reader. Also, ...

Hi there! I'd like to review your poem today. :) I think that you have a pretty good concept, but when you put it to words, it doesn't really work ...

I really felt the sadness in this poem, although I don't know much of the Columbine shootings (I'll do research on it when I'm done with reviewing). The emotion you ...

This was really funny. I liked the 3rd part. A really good Death Note Parody. I can't think of anything else to say. Good job, keep it up! :D Can't ...

This wasn't bad at all. I think you did an OK job. The problems: Punctuation: Please put this. Most people think that they aren't necessary for a poem, but yes, ...

Wow, I really liked this. It was done in a unique way. I didn't know what to expect when I clicked on this topic. Anyway, the only problems were: Punctuation: ...