Lightsong

Thanks for the in-depth review. It reminds me I'm lacking so much. :D

Ah, I see. Thanks. :)

Thanks for the review! I think I understand the first part of it. If my protagonist knows a character, it's better for him to name the character instead of referring ...

It's pyschological, eh? Never thought of it that, always thought it was just the kind of silence people didn't want. Thanks for your review, anyway!

Eh, every review helps. Thanks for yours. ;)

You're welcome. I'm glad that it's helpful because I was afraid it's the other way around. :)

Haha, yeah. Oh, grammar is my weakness, anyway. ;)

Yesss! A review at last! XD Thanks, ClippedWings. I agree with everything you've posted. :p

Are you kidding? I was waiting for this chapter. :D So far, it's the fantasy story I like most here. Yeah, I think you've mentioned it too often. Try relating ...

Lol, okay. Each of us has different interpretation on colours. :)

I didn't know it would give that much of an impact. You're welcome. Thanks for reading it anyway. :)

I'm sorry, I can't give you a constructive comment right now... because I just love it! It's fantasy, there are strong female characters, the intense and suspense and the clever ...

Oh, I was trying to say the parents had their attention on their other children and not the persona. I guess I need to make a better phrase to explain ...

The enlarged part is part of the poem. It's a long story why it is like that. XD Thanks anyway for the review, it makes me see more of the ...

Thanks for the compliment, and yes, I agree that I need to improve this poem more. :D Anyway, you certainly boost my spirit to write more!