Lightsong

Hey, thanks for giving me a thorough review! It deserves an explanation. '^' 1) There are several steps taken to control the affected people as well as the wounded ones. ...

Ah, I see! My college room has one of those, actually, I just didn't realize it. Totally not denying my lack of knowledge in anything air conditioner here. :D

Thanks for the review! :D I don't know what better way to describe the most modern air-conditioner - can you help me with that? >.< Hmm, I think I should ...

Thanks for the review! Nevea's 20 billion years old, that's a typo. :3 May we not be impaled indeed.

Thanks for the review! Nevea's 20 billion years old, that's a typo. :3 May we not be impaled indeed.

Ah, I see! All right. c:

This is humorous! I like how the font (thought I'm not sure it's really font you're talking here...) become people. :D A bit disappointed though, because when I read the ...

Ooh, interesting! I see it now. You're welcome! c:

2) Umm, not really. Chapter One has Anam telling Ilal the farmer wastes thr magic he is given, and that's all. Perhaps I'll insert that tidbit later on. 3) Just ...

proofread for me? Just keep reviewing, you're being too helpful. :3 This is a first draft anyway, so my main goal is to finish the novel for the first time. ...

Thanks again! Some explanation: 1) Ilal created the first two humans, and encouraged them to make their own languages when they were scattered and many. So yes, Ilal knew all ...

Thanks for the reviews! They're helpful. Nevea's the one who's going to be the queen, btw. :D

You're welcome! Glad to help! :D

Hey Nova, thanks for the review! The part about denial actually comes after the part about who's keeping the heart, so yeah, the explanation for it is done before it. ...

Thanks for the review! Agree with the first point. The second one, well, I don't put any deeper meaning into the repetition, actually. I just find it better than lumping ...