Lightsong

Thanks for the review! Would you mind if I tag you for future chapters? :D

Ah, yes, I sure hope Ilami doesn't come across as victim blaming. xD She's just used to being around independent, powerful people, so she doesn't understand why someone like Gael ...

Thanks for the review regardless! I agree multiple PoVs can make the MC's PoV pale in comparison. This is my first time using it. xD

I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR RHYME.

Radrook, I guess astronauts do speak this way, but clearly it's not poetic at all and shouldn't be put in a medium where being poetic is crucial. Also, the fact ...

Haha to be fair, this is a very quick poem with no revision whatsoever. xD But I get what you mean, though imo letters shouldn't be long. Thanks for the ...

I didn't notice until after I commented. xD

I'm here as summoned. '^' Cool poem though, love well-executed rhyme poems.

Oh, I see! It's all clearer now. You're welcome! :D

Oh, I see! It's all clearer now. You're welcome! :D

Eh, your choice. I think what you've written here can pass as a very, very short review, but you can choose to replace it with a complete review for the ...

I already got the reply from my fellow mods, and they said, um, turning your review to a comment isn't an option. >.> Sorry about that. Perhaps you can copy ...

I already got the reply from my fellow mods, and they said, um, turning your review to a comment isn't an option. >.> Sorry about that. Perhaps you can copy ...

Thanks for the review! :D I promise you, everything will be answered when the time comes... which might not be soon! >.> I'm taking baby steps in carrying the plot, ...

Thanks for the review! The part about Ilami and Aleveri is meant to show Ilami is okay when she links arm with Aleveri (as part of friendship), but didn't feel ...