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Lightsong

  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Catharsis

    This is like a video wanting to be viral. That's my first thought of it. xD It's just, what's the point ? What's the deeper meaning of this? o.o The ...

    May 8, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Mahogany Piano

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D After aimlessly searching through the music books for a little while longer, the owner of the store left his post at the counter to ...

    May 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Liz + Zac (5.1)

    I skip a chapter because I want to remove the ones in the Green Room. Hope you don't mind! :D I wake up when my head hits concrete. I couldn’t ...

    Apr 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Liz + Zac (4.1)

    Hey, I'm here to review. :3 3. I’m still failing to think before I act. Talking to Zac was stupid. Jumping in too far too fast with guys is half ...

    Apr 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: My Dear

    Oh, hey, here's a short poem for me to review! It's time to break the pattern. I'm going to talk about the font. First, it's too big. Unnecessarily big. Second, ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 5.1

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D Professor Smith remained standing after giving his own chair a look that said it would be less work to stand than to clear it ...

    Apr 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 4.2

    Yesterday has been a review-less day, and I blame this on YouTube. I am here, alas, with YouTube just at the back of my mind tempting me to materialize it ...

    Apr 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 4.1

    I actually plan to review the ones in the Room, but this one would be the last for the day. By four o’clock, Edna and Benjamin had been on the ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 3.2

    Hey, I'm here to review. “They’re uncomfortable around her. They think she ought to be at a home with more intensive medical care. You’re just about the only one who ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch9

    Last chapter to go out of the Room -- for now! I'm here to continue where I left. ;) Before I start, I have to say I'm excited about the ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch8

    Hey, I'm here to review! Just so you know, I've read all the chapters, and consider me as your biggest fan. I wish to see this finishes to an end! ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: if not for this exile

    Hey, I'm here to review! :D I think the strongest element in the poem is it takes a real situation that is poignant by itself, and pushes the poignancy by ...

    Apr 17, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Clash Royale Poem

    Oh my gosh a Clash Royale poem! I love the game.

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: birdfeeder

    Hey, I'm here to review. The reason I Liked this poem is because of its picturesque and simple. The words aren't fighting to stand out, the flow is smooth, and ...

    Apr 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You

    Hey, I'm here to review! I can see the poem having no stanzas, so perhaps this is an issue of formatting in YWS. In that case, I'm going to share ...

    Apr 12, 2017


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