Liaya

Thank you so much for your kind comments! I love hearing that my poetry can affect anyone. Yeah, they're about the main character in my novels, and each stanza is ...

I loved this! The way you begin it, with these two brothers seemingly fighting as enemies to the death, is very effective. It invests the reader. Then, little by little, ...

You know, I was actually planning on changing the style, but it's been received pretty well this way and I think I'll keep it. It's the first time I've ever ...

I'm so glad you like it! *sighs with relief* I'm not really used to sharing my poetry. It wasn't until a couple of years ago I discovered I had some ...

Thank you so much! I really appreciate hearing that. I guess none of them really do have a concrete ending though, huh? That's partially a mistake, partially on purpose. I ...

Thank you! I'm glad you like that. I wrote it when I was longing to just fly away to where I didn't need to care about anything. And yes, I ...

Haha, thanks again! I'll fix that up. Yeah, I think I get typing stutters or something. Good thing my pinkie is used to the delete button!

Thank you! I'm glad that was the only typo. I threw this out on the spot. I appreciate you reviewing my book SOO much! I'll make sure to keep writing. ...

Thanks for reviewing it! I'll go back through and smooth it out. I'm glad you liked it! :) Hopefully I'll have chapter 1 posted soon.

Thank you so much for your feed back! Have you read part 1?

Okay, that makes sense. In that case, try to show something more likable about both characters. After all, they have Gina in common. Then I think it would actually be ...

It's still beautifully written, though. Don't change it too much!

So, to everyone kind enough to read my prologue: first, I apologize about its length. I would love ideas on how best to cut it down to size. Also, the ...

Well, I was hooked within the first few sentences...a mother referring to her child as a "creature" definitely has an immediate affect. Your style is for the most part very ...