Liaya

Thank you so much for your comments! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem! :)

No, I wasn't trying to rhyme this poem! Most of my poetry is freestyle, without a set pattern of rhyme or meter. I'll see about fixing the solitary rhyme in ...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I hope I can keep it up!

Works beautifully that way too! Thank you!

Thank you so much for your kind review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Actually, Mark doesn't play a large part until the next novel and I hope that will ...

That's fine! Some poems a lack of punctuation is what you need. Of course, what is most important is that you're happy with the product.

Thank you for your feedback! I'm not offended at all! :) I'll take your suggestions into consideration!

Thank you so much for your feedback! I will go over the poem and see what I can do to improve it while keeping it true to its essence. I'm ...

Haha, good to know! I'll try to think of a good substitution. If you have any ideas, do tell!

Chapter 1 is posted. I'll try to get 2 up today

Thanks for your review! Looks like Fly is my most popular one so far. I'll admit, I'm pretty fond of it myself. I'm really glad you liked it and I ...

Thank you so much! This is exactly what I was looking for. I really appreciate when someone can catch my errors! :) When I've got some time, I'll go back ...

Thanks so much! Yeah, commas are hard for me not to over use, especially when I write this style. I'll go back and try to fix it up! Thanks for ...

Thank you so much! I'll admit, I wrote that first stanza when I was in a very musical mood. I'm a singer and I hold music very dear to my ...

Yeah, I've got poems like that...they're dead depressing because that's how I felt at the time, but then they actually turn out really good. I loved yours, though!