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Thank you as always for your review! If you%u2019re looking for character growth, you%u2019ll really like the next arc I%u2019m sending Val down. I hope you keep reading and find ...

Thank you for your review! I'll try and edit it a bit as per your suggestions! They were really helpful. :)

Thank you and welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy your time here. Just a little advice for you, at the bottom of the comment for a literary work, there%u2019s ...

Thank you for your thoughts! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you for your review! I'll get right to work fixing them!

Thank you for your words, I'll add a little more shock to the lightning and change up the spell. As for your third question, Champions like him have really fast ...

Hello! Thank you for your thoughts and this review! Thank you for pointing out that comma, I definitely hadn't seen that. As for Val, he is definitely supposed to act ...

Thank you for the review! I%u2019ll fix it all immediately!

I really like the way it sounds like chitterbug and it sounded so much like chitterbug I wasn%u2019t sure if you created a new adjective for this story. Thanks for ...

Oh, in that case, you did capitalize it once in the lower half of the story.

Yeah, I had no idea. I was just curious!

Thank you very much for your review. As for Val's gender, don't feel bad. People are mistaking Val for a girl all the time, I maybe should have picked a ...

Ah, cool! I'll totally check those out! Thank you

As always, thank you very much for your review. This chapter was originally going to be chapter 4, but I decided it was too short so I scrapped it. Then ...

Oh, no, that's totally okay! I was just confused about what you meant. I thought my chapters might have been miss-labelled or something.