Lezuli

Hello, there! I shall be reviewing this short story/poem for you. To start with, I really liked this poem, it flowed well and your word choice was amazing. I especially ...

Hello and greetings! I am Lezuli and I shall review this for you today! For starters, this is a nice, creepy little story with a few minor grammatical errors that ...

Hello, there! I'm here to review this for you. To start out, this was really well written! I actually saw no grammatical errors, so good job. I really loved the ...

Hello, there! I am here with a review for you. To start- this was an amazing poem. The word choice was beautiful and made this entire thing seem like a ...

Hello! I'm here to review this hilarious little poem for you! This is a very funny poem and I really like the end line since it is so off-kilter from ...

Hello! Since you've so graciously reviewed many of my works. I thought I'd return the favor now with this poem. To start out with, I quite like this poem. I ...

Hello, there! I'm here to give a review for you. This is an intresting idea, and with all that Casey's gone through, you feel a lot for her and her ...

Hello again! You might remember me from the first incarnation of this story and I'm back once again! I really, really like this version. The narrator is much smoother, the ...

Hello! I'm here to review this for you. I totally love this whole series! Chase and Annabel are so fun to read about and I love reading about their exploits! ...

Greetings and hello! I'm just here to review this for you. To start out with, I really liked the idea behind this story. Happiness enforcers and suicide taxes are all ...

Hello, there! I shall be reviewing this for you today! Allow me to star out by saying that this was a very nice story. The girls encountered obstacles, battled sickness ...

Hello! I shall be reviewing this for you today! To start out with, this does seem like a very creepy story. I like the way you created a twisted vibe ...

Hello, there! I am Lezuli and I shall review this poem for you. I really like poems like this that tell a story, so good job making a good story ...

Hello and greetings, I am Lezuli and I shall be reviewing this. To start out with, you have the bones of a great story, but just need a little polishing ...

Hello and greetings, I'm starting reading this here(I will go back and read the rest because this was really good) so I won't be able to add much to the ...