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Thanks, I'm still in the process of editing them and definitely agree with you on the last lines of each of the poems.

Thanks for the review. I just kind of wrote this one without rereading or editing anything so when I rework it I will take all this into account.

Thanks, I do hope I can make it better.

Thanks, I'm really grateful for any reviews or suggestions I get. The main reason I publish my stuff here is for the useful critiques, so thanks again.

Thanks. This is far from the complete story, it's a short story but I just decided to divide it into multiple parts.

Thanks, don't worry about it. Aviation history is pretty epic.

Thanks, I didn't even notice that I changed his name accidentally. I usually make changes on the original document I have rather than on the copy in yws, just in ...

This is good, a pretty solid beginning for a story. I know you say it's a prologue, but it seems more like a first chapter. Prologue is usually something separate ...

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks, the nit-picky criticism's just as helpful. I feel like I should've realized that about the flies and gnats phrase. Thanks.

Thanks. It is kind of imposing, I was planning to go in and fix that eventually.

Thanks, I'll definitely make those changes.

Thanks, I didn't look over this a second time before publishing it so I'm glad someone looked over the grammar for me.

Thanks, I like the idea about switching the scene with the world and the vial, I hadn't thought of that.

Thanks, these are changes I'll definitely make. I guess I should just say this is a standalone short story and I meant to create a lot of enigma about the ...