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I enjoyed reading this piece, it was short but conveyed a lot (or at least a lot of possibilities) due to it's open-endedness. First of all, the description of the ...

I enjoyed reading this, it was quite interesting and engaging, a good quality in all stories, especially horror. I think one of the ways you've done that is slowly but ...

This was pretty well written and I enjoyed reading it. I like seeing more short stories here and this one was exceptional. I guess one thing I'll say though is ...

I have not commented in a while, but reading this again has really interested me and i can only say it seems really good. The chapter is succinct in telling ...

I read this, and while it has good potential like anything to be a powerful introduction, I'm not going to lie it needs a lot of work in a few ...

I really liked this intro. There was a lot of depth already in the setting, which seemed to be almost 19th century Victorian England (Unless I'm wrong, and in that ...

Hey, I'm starting at the beginning of your series just to read it for fun, but I also saw a couple things i'd like to point out. The entire premise ...

This is a really good sci fi. I understand what you mean when you say it feels off, I think just some words are in odd combinations (like I think ...

This seems like a promising opening for a story but it is a bit choppy and jarring at times. It is mostly dialogue and while that can be extremely effective ...

This was one of the first things I read on this site and I did enjoy it. Perhaps the big thing I'd mention though is that the beginning is really ...

Cool story. I don't really know how to critique it because writing and peoples different styles are subjective, but a couple things I noticed were your description and the scene ...