Levity

I appreciate the comments! What is interesting is that Katgirl had similar comments and I switched around all the points you state here, haha. :) I am a journalist by ...

Definitely! You joined the same day I did! hi5! -Fred

I enjoyed this poem. The only difference I would make would be the end: "Now... finally, you... end". With or without the ellipses. Take care! -Fred

Any time, man. Keep up the good work! Stay awesome, -Fred

The beginning is not needed. "Cael stands." Instead, you could switch out that with "Cael stands with his father [in the forest], Mort, an old man with salt and pepper ...